Sunday, April 8, 2012

#SixSentenceSunday - Week 2

Happy Easter!

So I haven't really had much time to work on my manuscript this week, but here's another six sentences from Guardians.

While she was in the checkout aisle, noise in the store seemed to increase. Instead of the usual low murmur of background music and people talking, it became louder and angrier. Alana looked around with concern, thinking that a fight was about to break out, yet when she turned there was nothing.

Still, the loud whispers persisted. Alana kept looking around, trying to find the source of the noise. The cashier looked at her like she was crazy. 

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  1. Welcome to the Sixers, Miranda! Missed you last week. Interesting setup with this 6... you've got me wondering just what she's hearing. :)

  2. So no one else is hearing it. Makes me want to know what it is. Good six!

  3. I really want to know what she is hearing and why nobody else hears it. How intriguing.