In the meantime, here's six more sentences of Guardians.
David laughed nervously and finished his glass of wine. He set the glass down, moved his silverware around his plate, then took a sip of his water. Alana watched the whole exchange with amused excitement. For as confident and self-assured as David was, it was cute to see him so nervous.
"Okay, we're friends, right?"
Alana nodded. "I certainly hope so."
So, where do you think David was going with this? Hmmm?
What do your your six sentences say?
You've done a great job showing his anxiety. It makes for fun read.
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
DeleteI'm going to guess that he's going to declare his undying love. Am I right? ;)
ReplyDelete:P Not undying love but certainly more than just platonic affections.
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